雅思写作开头手法介绍 雅思学习

今天我们针对具体的段落，来讨论一下开头和结尾段的几种写法。我们既然要写开头段，首先要明确开头段的目的，一般来说，开头段我们需要达到这个目标：

A.引入主题：把题目中谈论的核心话题引入到我们的文章中；

注意：照抄原题不算字数，也会反映出考生有限的词汇资源；

应对策略：同义改写。

方法：

1.开门见山，直接入题

2.转折对比入题

方法1：开门见山，直接入题

例1：Manypeopleconsiderthedeathpenaltytobeappropriatepunishmentincertaincaseswhilstothersthinkthatthereisneverareasonforittobeused.Doyouagreeordisagree?

SampleAnswer:

Theissueofdeathpenaltyisanemotionalone,withmanypeopletakingtheattitudethatitneedstobeusedbothoftenandswiftlytodetercrime.Othersbelievethatinaso-called"civilized"society,thedeathpenaltyislittlemorethanbarbarism.

直接入题常用句型总结：

①Theissueof...isa/ancontroversial/sensitive/emotionalone.

②Theproblem/questionof...isnotanewone.

③Itisahot-debatedissue...

④Itisquitecommonthesedays...

⑤Thereismuchdiscussionthesedaysabout...

⑥Therehaslongbeenadebateabout...

例2：Peoplereceivealotofinformationfromnewsreportspresentedbyjournalists.However,somepeopleclaimthatwecannotbelievethenewsthatwearepresentedwith.Whatisyouropinionontheissue?Inaddition,whatqualitiesdoyouthinkjournalistsshouldhave?

SampleAnswer:

Livinginaninformationage,wearealltoooftenoverloadedwithvariousnewsinthenewspapers,ontelevisionandovertheradio.Butalargeproportionofthemprovetobeforgedorfabricated,suchastheSouthChinatigerscandalin2007.Sohowmuchcanwetrustthenewswearepresentedwith?Andwhatqualitiesshouldthejournalistshave?

例3：Theoveruseofmoderntechnologiesinrecreationalactivitiesmakeshumanbeingslesscreative.Doyouagreeordisagree?

SampleAnswer:

Inrecentyears,therehasbeenadebateaboutwhethertheuseofmodemtechnologyincreasesordecreasespeople'screativity.Ibelievemodemtechnologyhasgenerallyallowedpeopletobecomemorecreative.

方法2：转折对比入题

例1：Areportindicatesthatnowadayschildrenarebecomingmoreandmorelazy,fatandunsociable.Discussthereasonsforthisandgivesomeproposals.

SampleAnswer:

Thesocialandeconomicdevelopmentshouldhaveresultedinahappierandhealthierlifeforchildren.However,recentlyincreasinglymoreparentsareconcerningtheirchildrenhavebecomelazy,fatandunsociable.

表虚拟语气的句型：

2...shouldhave...However,...

2If...,shouldhave...