雅思考试避免写作失分方法讲解 雅思备考

今天小编为大家准备了雅思考试技巧避免写作失分点，希望对大家有所帮助，接下来跟小编一起来看一下吧。

IntheIELTSwritingtest,youaregradedonfourareas:taskachievement/response,coherenceandcohesion,lexicalresourceandgrammaticalrangeandaccuracy.Therearesomeverycommongrammarandvocabularymistakesthatweseetimeandtimeagain.Herearethekeyonestoavoid.

雅思写作会考察四个方面：任务完成度/回答、连贯和衔接，词汇来源、语法范围和准确度。我们已经一次又一次看过了很多常见的语法和词汇错误。接下来是需要避免的关键失分点。

1Drivingmakesuslazy…ontheotherhanditalsoaffectstheenvironment.Drivingmakesuslazy…ontopofthatitalsoaffectstheenvironment.Drivingmakeuslazy…Ontheotherhandthough,itisaneasywaytogetaroundthecity.

Explanation:UseOntheotherhandtopresentacontrasting/opposingpoint.Don’tuseittoaddasupportingpoint.用Ontheotherhand"来表示一个对比/相反的点，不要用在支撑点上

2Nowaday,manypeopleare….Nowadays,manypeopleare….

Explanation:Wealwayssaynowadays,nevernowaday.用nowadays不要用nowaday

3TherewasadramaticallyincreaseTherewasadramaticincrease

Explanation:Whendescribingchanges(especiallyinTask1)useadj.noun(adramaticincrease)ORverbadv.(itincreaseddramatically).形容变化的时候（特别是在Task1）用形容词名词（比如adramaticincrease）或者动词副词（比如itincreaseddramatically）

440%of60yearsoldpeopledrivecars.40%of60yearoldpeopledrivecars.40%of60yearoldsdrivecars.

Explanation:Whenyousayone’sage,yearsisplural–heis60yearsold.Whenyouuseagetodescribepeopleyoudon'tneed‘s’–a60-yearoldman.Youcanalsouseageasanoun.Inthiscase,ifit’splural,thenyouadd‘s’to‘old’–60yearoldsarehealthierthantheyusedtobe.

当你说别人的年龄的时候，年龄是复数当你用年龄来形容别人你不需要复数你也可以把年龄当成名词。在这种情况下，如果年龄是复数，在old后加s

5ManypeopleintheJapanbelievethat….ManypeopleinJapanbelievethat….

Explanation:Mostofthetime,wedon’tneedtouseanarticle(the)withcountries.E.g.American,Japan,England,France.Not‘theFrance’etc…However,ifthecountryisabbreviated,orthenamereferstoacollectionofislands,nationsorstates,thenwedousethe.E.g.TheU.K.,TheU.S.A,ThePhilippinesetc…大多数情况下，我们不需要在国家前面用the。但是如果国家名字是缩写的，或者名字指代一系列岛、国家或者州，就需要加the。

6…isanimportantreasonforthis.Besides,peoplealso……isanimportantreasonforthis.Besidesthis/Inaddition,peoplealso…

Explanation:It’sverycommontouse‘Besides’tolinkideastogether,butthisisincorrect.BesidesismorecommonlyusedinspokenEnglish,andmeans‘anyway’or‘regardless’.Inwriting,ifyouwanttouseittoaddasupportingargument/fact,thenyoucanusebesidesthis/thatorinaddition.

用besides链接想法是很常见的，但这是不正确的。besides更常用于口语，是不管怎样、不管的意思。在写作中，如果你想要用它来支撑一个论点或者事实，你可以用besidesthis或者inaddition。

7Ifthiscontinues,animalswillextinctIfthiscontinues,animalswillbe/becomeextinct

Explanation:Extinctisanadjectivenotaverb.Soyouneedtouseaverbwithit,likeare,willbe,willbecome,havebecomeetc…extinct是一个形容词不是动词，所以你需要用一个are、willbe、willbecome、havebecome这样的动词。

8ItIsobviouslythatexercisingfrequentlyisgoodforyourhealth.ItIsobviousthatexercisingfrequentlyisgoodforyourhealth.

Explanation:Obviouslyisanadverb.Inthissentencepattern(Itis_______that)youneedanadjective.obiviously是一个副词，在这个句型中需要用形容词。

9Inthisessay,Iwilldescribeabouttheproblemsandsuggestsomesolutions.Inthisessay,Iwilldescribetheproblemsandsuggestsomesolutions.

Explanation:Someverbsgotogether(collocate)withprepositions,andsomedon’t.Wecansaytalkaboutbutwedon’tsaydescribeabout.Wejustsaydescribe.有的动词可以和介词一起使用，有的是不可以的。我们可以说talkabout但是不可以说describeabout，单独使用describe就可以了。